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How do I mend ths broken heart
When the pieces are lost
In tangled emotions and crowded thoughts?

Where do I begin to sift
Through the rubble of this damaged life
Of tangled emotions and crowded thoughts?

Why can't I make sense of the pieces
Of the puzzle that lies in front of me
With tangled emotions and crowded thoughts?

When will the picture
Reveal itself to me through all
The tangled emotions and crowded thoughts?

What will it take for me to
Understand the meaning of
These tangled emotions and crowded thoughts?
©2006-2009 ~jthgirls
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A little something on my quest through my own "Tangled Emotions and Crowded Thoughts." Not sure if it makes much sense, just wrote it as it came to me after much time spent struggling with my emotions and thoughts.

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:iconnupraptor79:
You said that you're not sure if it makes much sense so I tell u that your words are a daily human enigma but usually a problem is a sensed one kind of thing and it demands an answer (a real one) so this mean that your poetry extol the reality and your doubt falls. All things have a sense, find a key to read it is the hardest and interesting part of the life ^^

Nice verse :)
:iconamlin:
i understand, i like it, its a nice short poem and it conveys your idea well

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"I want to wear something that says... look but don't touch... But then touch... when I'm not looking"
:icondaniellemulcahy:
wow. you have such beautiful words

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sorry for spelling
:iconjthgirls:
Thank you my dear :hug:

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If you would not be forgotten
As soon as you are dead and rotten,
Either write things worth reading
Or do things worth writing.

~Poor Richard's Almanac~
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:icondaniellemulcahy:
nonoo...thank you! :love:

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sorry for spelling

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